Tuesday, March 8, 2011

Eternal Journey...


Sometimes I walk in the rain;
Feet dug into the gushing waves,
Touching my skin,
The bubbles soar to penetrate,
Deep and deep…
Into a winding cacophony;
Of a heart that listens,
And a mind that evades…
Their variance is perpetual,
And their communion is a song;
To be sung,
In a visible haze,
Synonymous to Life,
For a singular;
And an eternal Journey! 

10 comments:

Blasphemous Aesthete said...

Into a winding cacophony;
Of a heart that listens,
And a mind that evades…


And I thought that the heart was the escapist, seeking the easy way out and the mind was like a strict police guard, refraining the heart.

Cheers,
Blasphemous Aesthete

Palak Vasant said...

Well not always what is usual that happens isn't it?
Here the variance is other way round, the heart wishes to say by and the mind wants to escape... there ain't any guards between the two just a communion with slight differences Thanks! :)

megharana said...

"synonymous to life" yes it is!!
i wish evasion had not been there!! but that is what makes life may be wid somethings expressed n some unexpressed eternally!
very nice to read that...

n Happy Women's day palak!! :)

Rajlakshmi said...

//Of a heart that listens,
And a mind that evades…
// I totally loved this... not the usual perception...
intriguing imagery... well written

Sourav said...

You know words were never invented to fully explain the peaceful aura that surrounds us when we are in communion with minds of the same thoughts or with the journey as eternal as you tried describing!

Liked your post, though I really agree with Anshul's comment too.

Keep writing! :)

pri said...

///Of a heart that listens,
And a mind that evades…///

exactly the state i am in...

lovely lines!!

Sayak said...

What if the singularity is revoked;
(and)Life is transformed into-
A multitude of ephemeral journeys?

the feeling lioness said...

sort of pretty

Rachit said...

beautiful and engrossing it is.. :)

Ginger said...

ur blog is really sweet.
why did you stop blogging!