Monday, July 19, 2010

So You Think...

So you think, I lie;
As if, I were the fake jam on pie.
I wonder about your thoughts;
As if, I were the one in droughts.
You display the agony around;
As if, I were the shallow ground.

So you think, you can hide;
As if, I were the shell of your pride.
I wonder about your disseminations into me;
As if, I were the endless sea.
You display the love around;
As if, I were the only one to be bound.

P.S.  I am super angry and I am purely venting out what's on my mind. Also, I am trying the rhyming style of poetry for the first time. Forgive me, if I am running into something stupid. I am super super PISSED :( :(

5 comments:

nidhi said...

Hahaha.. woohh I think u are super duperly angry on some1..
but dats really nice poetic words..

Palak Vasant said...

Yes Nidhi ur right I am super pissed on that person...I wish that person reads this and knows his/her deeds...P.S sorry I am still pissed but thanks for appreceating my work as always :)

Anonymous Someone said...

If this is what you do when you are angry, I bet you would make excellent thoughts when happy...

Beautiful rhyming.

Cheers
Blasphemous Aesthete

Palak Vasant said...

Thank You, Blasphemous Aesthete. :) Now I am quite happy to have that comment..lol

Sourav said...

This is so real you, and yeah you are at your freaking-writing best when you are upset; be it the typing or even the thinking speed! :p

I like! :)